Saturday, January 29, 2011

"Stories about Love" by Emma and Ainsley

So we love Kids Place Live on XM, and Mindy (the afternoon show) is advertising a Valentine's Day story writing contest- write a story about love, and the Story Pirates may "steal" your story, put it to music, act it out, etc. Below are Ainsley and Emma's contributions. The rules only that it's about love and that your parents can't help. I've also translated Emma's below hers.

Ainsley

The Skrrll (by Ainsley Foca)
There was a skrl who loved nuts so much she did nutheing but eat nuts. Her fother said you ned excrlis ("excercice"). She said I can't do it. She did not know wut to do. The skrl did wut her fother tolled her to do. So she jumpt tree to tree. Then she ate. The end.

Emma
The grl hoo luved hr blankit
one da a grl had hr blankit. One da she lust hr blankit. She couldn't find it hr sistr wit outsid she found it. hr sistr wit too see. she wus hape. the end

Translation: The girl who loved her blanket
One day a girl had her blanket. One day she lost her blanket. She couldn't find it. Her sister went outside. She found it. Her sister went to see. She was happy. The end.

There you go story pirates, steal that!

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